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Dark Cloud 3 Chloe Improvement Test

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Wanted to retry drawing Chloe since I was really not happy with her corset or hair. I always really enjoyed her design so I thought I'd give it a try.

Previous Version: [link]

I know the pose isn't quite as interesting and she's missing her crossbow, but this was mostly a test of personal improvement and I'd say i'm improved greatly in the past year and a half or so.

Hope you guys enjoy!
:peace:
Image size
2734x3332px 5.32 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot A1100 IS
Shutter Speed
1/79 second
Aperture
F/2.7
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Dec 1, 2012, 12:29:43 AM
Sensor Size
4mm
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

In comparison to your previous attempt, this version is much cleaner and more defined. I think v1 looked a little more 3D whereas this drawing looks a bit flat. This could be down to the pose (as forward facing poses can be a bit boring) but I think it works well enough to show off the Chloe's costume and such. Of course it would be nice to see some colour but as it is just a test and you are focussing on getting your line work right then its fine as it is.

Anatomy - Pretty good (maybe work on faces)
Costume - Amazing detail!
Props - love the weapon

I can see you really enjoy designing characters (as I can see from your gallery). Out of them all this is the one that popped out so overall I'd say it was a successful test!